tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-23960708807571822192024-03-12T22:52:08.265-07:00CB SoulsbyAnonymoushttp://www.blogger.com/profile/11770474548845786944noreply@blogger.comBlogger29125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2396070880757182219.post-56178436191655235892013-04-07T03:17:00.001-07:002013-04-07T03:17:42.888-07:00Title AnnouncementI'm very excited about this... My WIP has <b>finally </b>got a title.<br />
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It's taken six months! I really wanted it to be a single word, and since I wasn't getting anywhere on my own, I brainstormed some ideas with my boyfriend and flat mate. We tried Switch (too sci-fi), Trade (boring), The Trade (umm.. it happens more than once), Swap (just a really horrible sounding word. Try it.)<br />
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But we got there eventually. So, from now on the WIP formally known as "It Started With a Carp" will be called....<br />
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Anonymoushttp://www.blogger.com/profile/11770474548845786944noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2396070880757182219.post-34089172469949249832013-03-24T05:49:00.000-07:002013-03-24T05:49:32.980-07:00Word Cloud<div class="separator" style="clear: both; text-align: left;">
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To celebrate the fact that I've finally nailed the introduction for my (still untitled) WIP, I decided to make a word cloud. </div>
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If you're not familiar with word clouds, you paste text into a box and it analyses the words that come up most frequently, presenting it in a visual "cloud". They can be a handy tool for writers as they quickly point out any excessive repetitions. Thanks to my word cloud, I see I have a tendency to focus on people's eyes and hands. The word "back" is also very large, so I will go through the piece and see if it can be eliminated anywhere. That great big "like" could be a warning sign that I've gone a bit heavy handed on the similes. However, I'm pretty pleased to see that "heart" hasn't made it in there, nor has "say" or any distancing words like "think", "smell" and "see", and that most of the other big words are proper nouns. </div>
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Word clouds are also a neat way to get a "flavour" of the piece. "Water", "ocean", "harbour", "lake" and "church" all make appearances, which makes me confident the world building is stronger than it previously was. The "dialect" is also prevalent. "Ye" (you), "ta" (to), "ma" (my) and "aye" (yes) are all there, all of which enrich the world building. I'm pleased to see that a tiny "witches" has crept in. Although nothing magical happens in the introduction, I've tried to include magical elements as a hint towards future events, so it doesn't come out of the blue or feel jarring.</div>
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One word that no longer makes an appearance is "ring". The ring, upon which the whole narrative relies is now absent in the introduction. Though we're often told as YA writers to "jump straight into the action", or "start with the point of change", a lot of books I enjoy don't do this. Instead, I prefer the tension to build up until the "inciting event" hits. The inciting event in my book (i.e. the discovery of the ring) comes after the reader knows exactly what Tripp stands to lose. Hopefully, this will turn out to be the best course of action!<br />
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If you fancy getting a world cloud for your own book, I recommend <a href="http://www.wordle.net/" target="_blank">Wordle</a> which is where I created this one.<br />
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Happy writing and reading, friends!<br />
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-CB SoulsbyAnonymoushttp://www.blogger.com/profile/11770474548845786944noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2396070880757182219.post-28170175867742146432013-03-12T13:50:00.001-07:002013-03-12T13:51:00.651-07:00First Page CritiqueRecently, the first page of my current WIP was picked up for a critique on <a href="http://yaconfidential.blogspot.co.uk/" target="_blank">YA Confidential Blog</a>. The blog is an awesome resource for writers as real teenagers do the critiques. Being someone with a complete lack of access to teenagers this makes the feedback even more valuable for me!<br />
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You can see my first page in all its glory and the feedback it received <a href="http://yaconfidential.blogspot.co.uk/2013/02/teen-first-page-critique.html" target="_blank">here</a>.<br />
<br />Anonymoushttp://www.blogger.com/profile/11770474548845786944noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2396070880757182219.post-91457672806937263872013-01-18T10:03:00.002-08:002013-01-18T10:04:53.177-08:00Blog-Hop Questions<br />
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<span style="font-family: inherit;"><span style="border: 0px; font-style: inherit; margin: 0px; outline: 0px; padding: 0px; vertical-align: baseline;">Last week my critique partner, <a href="http://seabrookeleckie.wordpress.com/2013/01/09/the-next-big-thing-blog-hop/" target="_blank">Seabrook Leckie</a>, tagged me in a blog-hop post c</span>alled the Next Big Thing, where writers share some details about their works in progress. I was supposed to do it on Wednesday but I was too busy being excited about my <b>new job</b>. :) For anyone interested in my current book, here are my answers:</span></div>
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<span style="border: 0px; font-style: inherit; margin: 0px; outline: 0px; padding: 0px; vertical-align: baseline;"><span style="font-family: inherit;">On a remote Scottish island, fifteen-year-old Trypper Lawson discovers an enchanted ring with the power to exchange life and death, and has until midnight to offer himself as a sacrifice to a cult of death-worshippers before a curse is put upon the entire island.</span></span></div>
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<span style="font-family: inherit;">YA fantasy. It might become MG after my revision though, so watch this space!</span></div>
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<span style="font-family: inherit;">I don't know. I'm currently reading Scorpio Races by Maggie Stiefvater which is also set on an island and has a fantastical element to it, so I'll go with that!</span><b style="font-family: inherit; font-style: inherit;"><br /></b><br />
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<span style="font-family: inherit;"><span style="border: 0px; color: #333333; font-style: inherit; line-height: 23px; margin: 0px; outline: 0px; padding: 0px; vertical-align: baseline;">Lots of different things! The initial idea came to me after reading Scarlett Thomas' The End of Mr Y, with the idea of people hitch-hiking inside another's brain, mixed with the ability to transfer one "state" to another from Janice Hardy's Healing Wars, mixed with listening to the song <a href="http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=CZt5Q-u4crc" target="_blank">An Ode to Billy Joe by Bobbie Gentry</a> too much! The story is completely different to the one I started out with, though. The only thing left from its Billy Joe days are American sounding characters (like Trypp!). I think the island came into it because </span><span style="color: #333333;"><span style="line-height: 23px;">I've always wanted to write a book set on an island, and it's a combination of Louise's island in Jacob Have I Loved with the sinister elements of Summer Isle in The Wicker Man and the farce of Craggy Island in Father Ted.</span></span></span></div>
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<span style="font-family: inherit;">I'll give Nanowrimo the credit for that.</span></div>
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<span style="font-family: inherit;">Some lovely Scottish kids.</span></div>
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<span style="font-family: inherit;">I'll be seeking representation with this book. I don't think self-publishing would be right for me. I'm not good at self promotion :/</span></div>
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<span style="border: 0px; font-style: inherit; margin: 0px; outline: 0px; padding: 0px; vertical-align: baseline;"><span style="font-family: inherit;">There's a scene near the end that will blow your mind. At least it blew mine trying to write it...!</span></span></div>
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Anonymoushttp://www.blogger.com/profile/11770474548845786944noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2396070880757182219.post-11076379962006348452012-12-30T09:49:00.000-08:002012-12-30T09:49:46.054-08:00My favourite YA novels published in 2012...<div>
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<span style="font-family: inherit;"><span style="background-color: white; line-height: 19px;">Everything you want in a YA dystopian-thriller: a brilliant premise executed perfectly, a loveable cast of characters, a heroine you route for from page one AND a completely believable sort-of-not-quite-almost-nearly-romance. </span>This novel will hold a fond spot in my heart for a long time to come.</span><br />
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<span style="font-family: inherit;"><b>2. Rebel Heart - Moira Young</b></span><br />
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<span style="font-family: inherit;">Moira Young can do no wrong in my eyes. This book sweeps you away into another world that's believable and compelling. A real page turner, packed with plot.</span><br />
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<span style="font-family: inherit;"><b>3. The Raven Boys - Maggie Stiefvater</b></span><br />
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<span style="background-color: white; font-family: inherit; line-height: 19px;">I can't praise this book enough. Maggie Stiefvater is an incredibly talented writer who has that rare gift of interspersing dry humour through even the most emotional scenes. The characters were excellent and each had their own arc that left you loving and routing for each of them in turn. The friendship between the Raven Boys was a real strength of the novel. Every detail in every scene was necessary; either developing a character or plot in some way (even when it initially didn't seem to be). This is the first Maggie Stiefvater novel I've read and I will definitely be reading more. Clever and completely absorbing.</span><br />
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<span style="font-family: inherit;"><b>4. Pandemonium - Lauren Oliver</b></span><br />
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<span style="font-family: inherit;">It's not often that I like the second book in a trilogy more than the first. Lauren Oliver is such a skilled writer it was impossible for me not to adore this book. Cleverly structured, with the past and the present running concurrently, each chapter revealing another piece of Lena's puzzle. Saw the ending coming from a mile away but I didn't mind because everything else about the book was perfect!</span><br />
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<span style="font-family: inherit;">Wow. The creativity that went into this book was astounding. Such an original novel and totally spot on in terms of geekiness vs action. Michael Grant is the king of getting lots of ideas on the page in as few words as possible. So much happens in BZRK it's hard to believe it's a stand alone.</span><br />
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<span style="font-family: inherit;">I love cyborgs. I don't love steampunk though, and I felt that all the cinderella aspects of the novel let it down. Weird, I know, since that's the whole reason most people pick it up, but it felt gimmicky and unnecessary and otherwise detracted from an awesome novel that was beautifully constructed.</span></div>
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Anonymoushttp://www.blogger.com/profile/11770474548845786944noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2396070880757182219.post-73602589019413982412012-12-06T23:44:00.003-08:002012-12-30T03:38:54.017-08:00NANOVER... And what I've learned.Nanowrimo is officially Nanover. I "won" on Sunday 17th November, when the word count for my Nanonovel stood at 50100. I've loved every second of Nano. It's forced me to step outside my writer bubble and mingle with other writerly types and it's made me proud of what I do rather than faintly embarrassed. In short, Nanowrimo is Nanoawesome!<br />
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I think I can attribute a significant amount of my Nanosuccess to the stats page. I've always been an obsessive word counter, keeping records of words written and chapter lengths and total novel lengths, but I never knew how powerful the count <i>down</i> element could be. Waking up on Sunday morning knowing I had 7,000 words left to write was far more motivating for me than knowing I'd written 43,000. By the time I've reached 43,000 it's become abstract. 7,000, on the other hand, is a goal I know I can accomplish on a lazy Sunday. So, with this in mind, I've created a spreadsheet for my future projects that does essentially the same thing as the Nanostats page (albeit less attractively). I can set my writing goal and it automatically tells me what my daily word count needs to be, then draws a graph plotting my actual words against my word goals. If anyone wants a copy, let me know in the comments and I'll email you one! You need excel or Open Office to run it.</div>
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I want to be an author. I want to be an author. I want to be an author. I want to be an author. I want every day to be like Nanowrimo. I want to have the time and energy to write 7,000 words a day every day for ever more. Thanks.</div>
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I know this sounds silly, but I don't think I've ever been a happier writer than the time I've been a Nanowriter. This is the first ever first draft I've written where at no point have I become overwhelmed with the enormity of the task, because I've proven to myself that I can write lots of good quality, interesting words very quickly. And that makes me really, really, really happy. The glow I got after my 12,000 word weekend could not be rivalled by even the musical episode of Buffy The Vampire Slayer.</div>
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*gasp* I said it! EASY! I know writers are never meant to say that but I've never gotten so much writing done with such little mental anguish before and I hope that this is something I can replicate. You know I'd resigned myself to thinking that I just hated the drafting process and it was in revisions that I found enjoyment with writing. WRONG! I hated the drafting process because I wasn't getting excited enough about the drafts I was writing. Without the excitement I didn't have the motivation to do it. This post on <a href="http://thisblogisaploy.blogspot.co.uk/2011/06/how-i-went-from-writing-2000-words-day.html" target="_blank">Pretentious Title</a> was a real eye-opener for me, making me realise that the reason I was struggling with first drafts was because the scenes weren't good enough. Before every scene of my Nanonovel I took a bit of time to work out what I wanted to write and how I wanted the scene to look and progress and then I stopped and thought, "is that cool enough?" I didn't write a word of the scene until I was so excited about what I'd come up with there was no way I couldn't!</div>
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...had a bit too much fun at the library...Anonymoushttp://www.blogger.com/profile/11770474548845786944noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2396070880757182219.post-30783847277659921832012-10-26T10:39:00.001-07:002012-10-26T10:39:40.812-07:00Why Writing A Novel Is Like Making A Cup of Tea (a very English Extended Metaphor)<span style="font-family: Trebuchet MS, sans-serif;"><br /></span>
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<span style="font-family: Trebuchet MS, sans-serif;">There's one phrase every aspiring author will come across time and time again: writers write. If you're anything like me, you'll misconstrue that seemingly simple statement and turn it into "writers write novels". Which, if you're still being like me, quickly leads to anguish and self berating; "I didn't write a single word of my novel this weekend! How dare I call myself a writer? I don't deserve to even let the word pass my lips!" But what people really mean when they say "writers write" is "writers <i>practise</i> writing". And, as any one who plays an instrument knows, there is a massive difference between <i>practising</i><i> </i>and <i>composing</i>. My first stab at a novel was the equivalent of me mastering the scale of C, declaring my attempt to compose a symphony, and ending up with Twinkle, Twinkle Little Star. </span><br />
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<span style="font-family: Trebuchet MS, sans-serif;">But wait. What's this got to do with tea? We're getting there. First, a basic explanation of how to make tea, since everyone's very particular about the process (and I've been told that in America it requires lemon slices and a fridge?) Here's how it's done: cup, tea bag, boiling water, some degree of squeezing / stirring / leaving to diffuse on own accord, milk. Sweeten with sugar and dunk chocolate HobNobs if so desired.</span><br />
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<span style="font-family: Trebuchet MS, sans-serif;">My beautifully constructed metaphor will focus on the whole squeezing / stirring /leaving to stand situation. No it doesn't matter which method is superior, its function is the same; the diffusion (if you want to get scientific) of the flavour molecules into the water particles (see - <i>scientific</i>). For clarities sake, this will be referred to from now on as "brewing". Brewing (planning, researching, world-building, character profiling) is what the tea (novel) needs to do before you add the milk (words), or sweeten with sugar (metaphors and similes and all that) and dunk in chocolate HobNobs (?) </span><br />
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<span style="font-family: Trebuchet MS, sans-serif;">Now how I ended up with Twinkle Twinkle Little Star instead of a symphony was because I really wanted to write a novel and I knew that "writers write" and when I put two and two together I concluded that a novel could be written by writing (you can see how I got my wires crossed).Wrong, wrong, wrong. What hampered my early writing attempts was that I just didn't do enough brewing.And then when my tea tasted weak, I tried to fix it by pouring in more and more milk and then dumping in table-spoons of sugar. And when it <i>still </i>didn't<i> </i>taste right I dunked in a whole packet's worth of HobNobs and wondered why there was a pile of biscuit slush at the bottom of my tepid, white liquid. Really, that first cup of tea only resembled a cup of tea for the fact that it was in a mug (read: Word document... see, I've really thought about this).</span><br />
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<span style="font-family: Trebuchet MS, sans-serif;">Because the thing about writers is they write <i>sometimes. </i>The rest of the time they brew. Research. Develop characters. Build intricate worlds. Draw sketches of cyborgs. Found new religions. Persecute their follows. Cut-out pictures from magazines and assemble Frankenstein-style pop groups. Write their next hit single. Create! Explore! Get excited! BREW!</span><br />
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<span style="font-family: Trebuchet MS, sans-serif;">But wait, the metaphor doesn't end there (I told you it was extended)! It's all well and good brewing your tea but if you're using Tesco value bags (that taste like wood) then your novel will taste bad no matter how expertly you've brewed it.<span class="yiv1745767990805172608-26102012">Your novel deserves the best ingredients: hand pick tea leaves (read: quality scenes), fresh, organic Jersey milk and blackstrap molasses! </span>And if you don't experiment with different tea bags, you'll never know whether you're a Clipper fan or a PG Tips pyramid bag fan or even a Peppermint, Earl Grey, Camomile or Vanilla Rooibos fan. Loose leaf! De-caff! The list is literally endless. Experiment with tea bags before you settle on any one type. (If the analogy is lost on you at this point, the different flavoured tea represent other people's novels and the drinking of them represents, you know, reading). Some authors use the most flavoursome tea bags and brew them so expertly that they can add Sainsbury's Basic UHT milk and still get the perfect cup. I call this JK Rowling Breakfast Tea.<br /><br />And if you can bare it for a little longer, we've reached the last part of the analogy. Which I'll kick off with an anecdote (lucky you). I made my first cup of tea when I was about seven. It was for my mum. I followed all the steps that I'd observed and proudly delivered it to her in bed. Whereby she took a sip and grimaced and said "did you remember to boil the kettle?" It clearly hadn't occurred to my seven-year-old self that there was a reason why the water came from the kettle rather than the kitchen tap (namely the making it hot part) so I'd only memorised the act of pouring the water from it. How does this relate to writing? Well having good intentions and being enthusiastic (and observing how other people do it) doesn't mean you yourself will be able to reproduce the same effect. You're always going to have to learn the basics. And you're also going to have to accept that it takes time to get to grips with them (when I visited my nine-year-old sister last week she proudly informed me she'd learned how to make tea, but included an adorable step whereby she decanted the milk into a measuring jug with a spout before re-pouring it into the tea because otherwise she'd spill it). Once you've got the basics you need to practise using them and refining them (in order to miss out the unnecessary measuring jug step).<br /> </span><br />
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<span style="font-family: Trebuchet MS, sans-serif;"><b>2. Flash fiction</b> - Like the short story but on a tiny scale. Flash fiction is anywhere from about 250 words to a couple of thousand; a very manageable goal for most schedules.Flash fiction is an excellent way to generate ideas and teach you how to choose the minimum words for the maximum effect. It's also a great opportunity to try out different styles and voices, which you only need to maintain across a small section.</span><br />
<span style="font-family: Trebuchet MS, sans-serif;"><b>3. Opening chapters</b> - This is my favourite thing to do, personally. I have tonnes of first chapters lying around. It's also a nice way to tell if a particular story grabs you, or whether you've brewed it long enough. The point where I loose interest tends to correlate with a non-existent plot outline.</span><br />
<span style="font-family: Trebuchet MS, sans-serif;"><b>4. Re-writes books </b>- This is something I also love to do; taking a book that already exists and adopting the author's style to a different scenario, or using the author's scenario but writing it in a different style. I like to use varied source material for this. In the past I've used the charming voice of Ugwu in Chimamanda Ngozi Adichie's Half of a Yellow Sun to write the opening of a historical magical realism young adult, and have used the plot of Anne McCafferey's Chronicles of Pern, replacing the purple prose with short, sharp sentences. This is a great way of teaching yourself to pay attention to sentence and word choice.</span><br />
<span style="font-family: Trebuchet MS, sans-serif;"><b>5. Fan fiction</b> - OK, cheesy, I know. But no one is going to force you to put it on the internet or self-publish it and it definitely doesn't have to be erotic. The fun with fan fiction is that the characters and world are already fully formed. Your task is to develop plausible plots and make sure the scene (and sentences and words within them) build on the characters and setting to make them recognisable (and consistent). It's great practise for character development as well. I recommend taking a character you'd associate with one setting / role (e.g. Dana Scully) and plopping them somewhere completely different (e.g. Sunnydale High), whilst keeping the setting and premise recognisable and having the character behave believably. Can you imagine how Scully would attempt to explain away all the bizarre happenings on the Hell Mouth whilst performing an autopsy on a vampire and declaring "I'm a Medical Doctor!"</span><br />
<span style="font-family: Trebuchet MS, sans-serif;"><b>6. Blog</b> - It doesn't have to be fiction, you can practise your unique writer voice via non-fiction routes as well. I would throughouly reccomend reading <a href="http://terribleminds.com/" target="_blank">Chuck Wendig's blog </a>for an example of an author practising their voice through non-fiction. His blog posts are always hilarious and engaging, even when he's just writing recipes or talking about his dog.</span><br />
<span id="yui_3_7_2_1_1351264388601_163" style="font-family: Trebuchet MS, sans-serif;"><b>7.Tweet </b>- Twitter is all about getting the message out as effectively as you can and as a result, tweeting is great way of learning how to write effective dialogue. Again, the limited space you have forces you to select the best words. It's a great habit to get into because no one wants to read long rambling dialogue (unless it adds to characterisation).</span><br />
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<span style="font-family: Trebuchet MS, sans-serif;">That's a lot to take in, but the message I'm trying to convey is not to turn off your imagination in favour of writing writing writing.Enjoy creating.Practise your craft.But have fun at the same time.</span><br />
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<span style="font-family: Trebuchet MS, sans-serif;">A word of warning. There is such a thing as over-brewing... you know, when you get liver spots on the top of the water. I could go into how liver spots represent the writers psychological well-being but I think you'd agree that my extended metaphor's run out of steam (he he he)...</span><br />
<span style="font-family: Trebuchet MS, sans-serif;"><br />Until next time.</span><br />
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<span style="font-family: Trebuchet MS, sans-serif;"><span style="color: #222222;">Tonya
Kuper over at </span><span style="color: navy;"><span lang="zxx"><u><a href="http://yastands.blogspot.co.uk/2012/10/time-management-for-writers.html" target="_blank">YA Stands</a></u></span></span>
offered up some advice last week about time management. I though it might be interesting to see what time management strategies I use myself.</span></div>
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<span style="font-family: Trebuchet MS, sans-serif; font-size: small;"><b>Eliminating
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<span style="font-family: Trebuchet MS, sans-serif;">I
used to be part of a lift-share on my commute to work. Two hours a
days, five days a week wasted. There's nothing quite like
traffic jams and that gentle rocking motion to completely wipe out
your creative energy. These days, I get a bus to work. Which means
for one and a half hours a day, five days a week, I get to do
“research” (research is what I call reading YA books ;)). If I
don't read at any other point during the week, I don't have to feel
guilty. </span></div>
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<span style="font-family: Trebuchet MS, sans-serif;">The
same applies for my lunch break. I used to work in the middle of the
countryside and there was no where to go at lunch so the time would
be spent chatting to co-workers and catching up on work-related
tasks. Another big way to kill creativity. Now, I take myself away
from the work environment, and though I only have a thirty minute
break, I can use this time, at the very least, to think<i>
</i>about my various writing projects. On a good day, I'll do some
writing. On (most) other days, I'll just contemplate. The crucial element is
that for thirty minutes in the middle of the day, I stop being an
Administrator and become a Writer. I use this time to organise my
thoughts and work out what I'm going to write when I get home.
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<span style="font-family: Trebuchet MS, sans-serif;">Weekends are when I get to imagine myself as an actual
author and conduct my day exactly how I would if I were doing this
full time. I get a <i>lot</i>
done on a Saturday and a Sunday. I also get to make up for all my
short-fallings throughout the week. If I haven't hit a word count
goal for my WIP or managed to revise a chapter of my MS, Saturday's the day I do it. Saturdays and Sundays are like being given 10 more week days all at
once! They're also when I let myself do all the other stuff that
isn't writing – agent research, goodreads, catching up on blogs,
planning future novels, character profiles etc.</span></div>
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<span style="font-family: Trebuchet MS, sans-serif; font-size: small;"><b>Working
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<span style="font-family: Trebuchet MS, sans-serif;">I would love to earn a living as an editor or an agent, but editor or agent aren't jobs you can easily get. You have work hard and (usually) intern or (maybe) do an MA to even get your foot in the door. What I want more is to be an author. In other words: I have no time to intern or do an MA to help me get a "career". I have only time for a job. But what my job gives me that's far more important than career satisfaction (for the moment anyway) is the fact that I can leave it at the door. I don't think about it when
I'm not there. I don't get the dreaded Sunday blues. I don't lie awake at night worrying about it. It doesn't make me so drained that all I want to do when I get home is watch TV (incidentally, I don't have a TV - another time management strategy). Add it together
and I have so much more mental space to create.</span></div>
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<span style="font-family: Trebuchet MS, sans-serif;">Money <i>is </i>tight.
But my motivation to be an author far out-ways my motivation for ... well ... anything else. And the longer I go not buying or wanting
things, the easier it gets. That Salvi concert pedal harp can wait. There'll be plenty of time for driving when I'm old! A new ruck sack? But the last one has <i>completely</i> fallen to pieces yet! Right now, poor doesn't matter. Productive does.</span></div>
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<span style="font-family: Trebuchet MS, sans-serif; font-size: small;"><b>Working
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<span style="font-family: Trebuchet MS, sans-serif;">9pm,
without fail, I get better at writing. I don't know why, but there's
something about that time. I get more done from 9 - 10 pm than I ever can from, say 4 pm - 7 pm. Knowing that I will want to write at 9 and I will be better at writing at 9 and I will enjoying writing at 9 means
that I <i>can</i>
let myself be lax the rest of the time. It also means that I need to start
at 8:40 because it always takes me twenty minutes to get into
anything!</span></div>
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<span style="font-family: Trebuchet MS, sans-serif;">I'm lucky in that I'm an introvert. I find social interaction draining and need very little of it to get by. But prioritising my writing over friends, family and quality time with my boyfriend doesn't make me particularly happy. Unfortuntately, I have to. I have two families, six siblings, not to mention my "in-laws". I just don't have time to see everyone! And if I did, I'd be less happy, because I need to write! Sometimes, you have to put yourself first in life. You'll only
become resentful if you prioritise other people's needs before your
own. And anyway, that's what the "acknowledgements" page in your first published book is for!</span></div>
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Anonymoushttp://www.blogger.com/profile/11770474548845786944noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2396070880757182219.post-16365701293046561692012-10-04T09:04:00.000-07:002012-10-04T09:05:30.698-07:00Drawing inspiration from the bad<br />
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I know this isn’t a particularly
noble post to be writing. Regarding someone else’s creative
endeavours in a negative way (when you yourself are aware of
all the effort they must have put into it) is pretty low. That said, you can’t pick and choose
where inspiration comes from, and I, unfortunately, am often inspired
by reading something bad.</div>
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So in an attempt to glean back a slither
of self-respect, here's what reading bad fiction has taught me:</div>
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There’s a market for <b>anything</b></div>
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We all know the "guidelines" for writing fiction ... show, don't tell, active voice over passive voice, no head-hopping, no deus ex machina ... They’re helpful "tips", but when you read a book that’s broken every
single one of them, you’re forced to accept that there is no right
way for a book to be. Worried your Zo-Ro-Co (zombie romantic comedy) about a love-sick cow won't appeal to the masses? Don't be! Put your self-doubt monster to bed. No matter what you’re writing, someone out there wants to read it. Just stay true to yourself and write the book that <b>you</b> love.</div>
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They must be doing <b>something</b> right</div>
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I think a good book needs to have complex, action-filled
plots, snappy writing, believable dialogue and 3D characters. Reading fiction that lacks what I view to be the basic and necessary components of a story forces me to consider what <b>is</b> good. More often than not, it's fantastical world building and a unique premise. I can certainly accept that my writing suffers from the dreaded “white room” syndrome. No
coincidence that my current re-draft of Pearl is to give it a more
visceral sense of place...</div>
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3. I could do <b>better</b> ... couldn't I?</div>
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The dreaded, "I could've done that" is one of my pet hates. You hear it a lot in relation to modern art. "A toilet? Call that art?" The point, however, is that you didn't do it. They did. They thought of it. They put the effort into creating it. They pitched it and got it accepted. You didn't. </div>
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However, there's a big difference between dissing someone's work when you've never put any effort into achieving something similar and recognising that you are better at doing something than someone else. The second can be motivational. If you're striving to become an Olympic swimmer and in your practise you surpass the score of the lowest competitor, then you can congratulate yourself. You're achieving you goals. That's a good thing. But in the same way that there's more to being an Olympic swimmer then just being fast, there's also more to getting a book published than writing one. Yes, you've recognised that the basics (swimming, or writing) are better than the competition, but what else did that person have to do to achieve their dream? What have they sacrificed? Are you willing to sacrifice stuff too? Did they write an amazing query? Did they do their agent homework thoroughly and keep querying despite hundreds of knock-backs? Did they hit a trend bang on time? There's more skill involved in success than just basic talent. Reading a bad book is proof of it!</div>
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Until next time x</div>
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Anonymoushttp://www.blogger.com/profile/11770474548845786944noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2396070880757182219.post-15690038221476866192012-09-05T11:19:00.000-07:002012-09-15T11:31:34.486-07:00NANOWRIMO<div style="font-style: normal; margin-bottom: 0cm; orphans: 2; widows: 2;">
<span style="font-family: inherit;"><span style="font-weight: normal;"><span style="color: black;">So
September has only just started but I'm already thinking about
NANOWRIMO. Every year it kind of sneaks up on me and I only ever
really give a half-arsed stab at it. Not this year! This year I
will be prepared. My current WIP (the one that just kind of fell
into my head immediately after my Pearl high and was so different I
just had to write it) is well under way. And according to my schedule
will be completed and simmering at the back of my mind long before
November rolls around. Which gives me plenty of time to choose
from one of my other, more established, more developed plot
ideas. But the problem is I'm kind of in love with them all.</span></span><span style="font-weight: normal;"><span style="color: black;">So
how to choose?</span></span><span style="font-weight: normal;"><span style="color: black;">I've
(crudely) boiled them down to the following descriptions (plot wise,
not stylistically):</span></span><span style="font-weight: normal;"><span style="color: black;">a)
The Hunger Games meets Pern</span></span><span style="font-weight: normal;"><span style="color: black;">b)
Dolls House meets Divergent</span><span style="color: black;">c)
The Little Mermaid meets Fringe</span></span><span style="font-weight: normal;"><span style="color: black;">You
see what I'm up against here?</span></span><span style="font-weight: normal;"><span style="color: black;">Still,
at least I'm in a much better position than I previously have been. I
actually know how to plot now! ;)</span></span><span style="font-weight: normal;"><span style="color: black;">What about you? Will you be joining the masses and slogging away at a first draft this November? And how do you go about choosing what to write next? Let me know in the comments.</span></span><span style="font-weight: normal;"><span style="color: black;">Till
next time.</span></span></span></div>
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Anonymoushttp://www.blogger.com/profile/11770474548845786944noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2396070880757182219.post-4103734254995289492012-08-19T09:23:00.003-07:002012-09-15T11:31:08.700-07:00Flash Finished?Well the competition over at <a href="http://www.writerunboxed.com/" target="_blank">writerunboxed</a> has ended and unfortunately I didn't place (which is sad because I wanted one of those t-shirts for jogging!). But the whole thing has been a massive learning experience for me; the challenge of writing 250 word pieces, coming up with new ideas in such a short space of time, drawing inspiration from sources/ images I wouldn't normally choose, it was all a brilliant way to get out of my comfort zone. So much so, I'm going to incorporate 250 word flash pieces into my weekly writing as a way to keep pushing myself.<br />
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That wasn't all I got out of participating though. The competition got me talking to people about my writing, including many of my real life friends. That in itself has been a big step for me. It's also the first time I've put my writing in a public forum under my "writer" name and to have other writers like <i>my</i> writing enough to make me a weekly <i>winner </i>on two occasions was an amazing feeling. It was a really supportive environment unlike some of the critique forums I've used before which can at times be little intimidating for a newbie writer ;) Anyway, the whole thing's really spurred me on and made me realise how much I want this!!<br />
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In other news, I've finally settled on which shiny new idea to move onto now that Pearl is finished. I've pitched it to a couple of friends who were enthusiastic about the premise which was pretty exciting! Just working on the plot grid and also quite excited to develop the main character who's going to be a super-cool-intelligent-wry-humoured geek. Oh and of course, I've been browsing flickr to find source images for future flash pieces, the results of which I may post up here depending on how much I like the outcome!<br />
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Until next time.<br />
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<br />Anonymoushttp://www.blogger.com/profile/11770474548845786944noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2396070880757182219.post-57369403256329931212012-08-15T08:28:00.004-07:002012-08-15T08:32:54.223-07:00PearlI finally have the internet in my new house. Just in time to let you in on some good news...<br />
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Moving is always stressful. Cleaning, packing, the inevitably unreliable man with a van. But it's also a chance for reflection and renewal. During my organising, I took the opportunity to collate all the things I've written during the two years I've lived at my old house. I got the chance to read through first drafts turned into second drafts, pages of ideas, character names, pictures, maps, several timetables, plot grids, re-worked plot grids, scribbled out plot grids, an intricately devised metric time-keeping system (?). I got to see all the ink and paper that's gone into this hobby of mine.<br />
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This here, is the <i>first</i> first page of "Pearl":<br />
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"Pearl" which now stands completed at 82,000 words.<br />
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Yup. Somewhere in the last several months this piece of paper turned into my first proper completed novel. I'm not even sure how it happened. But after I'd finished and after several hours of not thinking about writing (and eating cake, and watching The Beatle's Anthology with my friends) I felt a little odd. Because writing (or trying to write a novel at least) has become such an ingrained habit I feel wrong not doing it.<br />
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Turns out, that's how I wrote "Pearl" in the first place. I made it a habit. But it wasn't always that way. I often fell short of my daily writing goals, sometimes for weeks on end. I found it hard to stay tied down to one project. I flitted from idea to idea, changing plots, scraping characters, re-building worlds as I went. For a long time, "Pearl" was my secondary project. I didn't even realise she was going to be the idea I put all my effort into until somewhere down the line I found a writing goal that suited me and just stopped flitting.Then I started making progress and the progress became addictive.Watching the word count go up, even when it was by as little as 1,000 words a day, was what spurred me on. And spurred me on all the way to completion.<br />
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So "Pearl's" having a little rest for a while but my brain isn't ready to give up its addiction. I've already started going through all my ideas to find out what I'm going to work on next. Some of them have been ridiculous. Some of them have been good. Some of them aren't sci-fi. One of them involves <i>mermaids</i>.<br />
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I don't know what will come after "Pearl". All I can say is watch this space!<br />
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<br />Anonymoushttp://www.blogger.com/profile/11770474548845786944noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2396070880757182219.post-35717283238195040102012-07-31T03:45:00.003-07:002012-07-31T03:45:58.158-07:00Young Adult All The Way<div class="MsoNormal" style="margin: 0cm 0cm 0pt;">
<span style="font-family: Arial; font-size: 10pt;">I’ve recently started reading a novel by an author who has previously written for young adults. I loved the young adult book because it had a good premise, excellent world-building, relatable characters and unpredictably. I was fully expecting the adult one to contain all these things but on a bigger scale.</span></div>
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<span style="font-family: Arial; font-size: 10pt;">Instead, I found none of these things. What I did find was bizarre and somewhat pompous language selection. Reading the novel made me aware that the author must have “dumbed down” his writing style for the young adult book. But why? The adult book was at times incomprehensible. It made me feel stupid. It almost seemed to mock me and my inability to work out what was going on. And thanks to the surreal writing style, the dialogue came off as entirely unbelievable. I struggled to re</span><span style="font-family: Arial; font-size: 10pt;">late to the main character (who is more-or-less the same age as I am and works in an office like I do) when I have no problem relating to post-apocalyptic heroine hunters.</span><br />
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<span style="font-family: Arial; font-size: 10pt;">The experience has made me consider what young adult really means to me. Why am I so much more satisfied with a young adult novel? Why do I choose to read a young adult novels over adult novels? Why do read them (and lots of them) with un-flagging attention while I struggle to stick with an adult book to the end? Here’s some of the ideas I’ve come up with:</span></div>
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<span style="font-family: Arial; font-size: 10pt;"><strong>1. Clear Writing</strong></span><br />
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<span style="font-family: Arial; font-size: 10pt;">I’ve never been made to feel stupid by a young adult novel. That’s not to say they don’t stretch me. I’ll still reach for the dictionary.com from time to time, but the process is enjoyable, it’s a learning process. I’m rarely presented with a situation where my mind boggles, where I can’t work out what the characters are doing. That’s not to say I’m necessarily happy with where the plot it going but I can, at the very least, understand it. (And no, before you ask, I don’t have any problems with reading!) More importantly, I’m made to feel included. The author wants me to get what’s going on. There’s no pretentiousness. The ultimate result is that I can move through the plot without having to re-read passages to work out what the hell's going on.</span><br />
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<strong><span style="font-family: Arial; font-size: 10pt; mso-fareast-font-family: Arial;"><span style="mso-list: Ignore;"><span style="font-family: 'Times New Roman';">2. W</span></span></span><span style="font-family: Arial; font-size: 10pt;">ell paced / fast-moving plots</span></strong><br />
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<span style="font-family: Arial; font-size: 10pt;">If your local book shop is anything like mine, the adult novels are grouped by genre whilst the teen novels are grouped together simply for being for teens. I like sci-fi, but selecting a novel from the sci-fi section gives me no indication as to how it will be written. Is there action or is it long and arduous? Are there going to be huge long descriptions of technologies and political systems? Will the novel start with a long back-story laying out all the world-building facts I’ll need in the back of my mind if I hope to understand anything it’s on about? It’s hard to know. But if I selected a sci-fi from the young adult section, there’s a very high chance that the story will start right where it needs to and not a moment sooner, any descriptions of technologies and political systems will be woven throughout and only if necessary, and yes, there will be a hell of a lot of action. Why? Because that’s what agents take on. That’s what agents believe will sell. And does that stuff sell because teens have shorter attention spans? Or is it because, like me, they want to consume as many stories and messages and ideas as possible? There’s not enough time to read every book in the world and I tend not to pick the one where I’m playing catch-up with an author’s imagination. I tend to choose the one where the author’s made sure every last word is relevant.</span><br />
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<span style="font-family: Arial; font-size: 10pt;">This is probably the most significant point and the one that is most young adult specific. We do a lot of learning when we’re teenagers. We start becoming who we want to be, rather than who we’re told to be. We leave our learning institutions, some of us for ever. But it’s not easy. It’s been several years since I stopped actually being a teenager, but the person who emerged out of those formative years is still me and I still need and want coming-of-age messages. I don’t have life figured out and neither do the teen protagonists I read about. In fact, through the vast array of young adult books you can read, this is one of the most common threads. By seeing how other characters deal with that transition, I can help myself with my own (rather lengthy) transition. You don’t really get that kind of help from grown-up books.</span></div>
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<span style="font-family: Arial; font-size: 10pt;">What do you think makes young adult novels so great? Do you agree with any of my points or does young adult mean something different to you entirely? Please let me know in the comments section.</span></div>Anonymoushttp://www.blogger.com/profile/11770474548845786944noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2396070880757182219.post-30463960139243774692012-07-20T05:24:00.001-07:002012-07-20T05:27:11.836-07:00New Territory / Milestones<br />
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<span style="font-family: Gill Sans;">I feel a) a bit silly and b) like a bit of a phony saying that. Silly because it doesn’t sound like much of a milestone and a phony because my first draft was only 16,000 words and I only wrote the dialogue (i.e. the first chapter consisted of two words: “ Pearl hunts”, and the ending didn’t even exist). </span></div>
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<span style="font-family: Gill Sans;">But it’s still a milestone because I’ve never not given up at this stage. I’ve never let myself get this far. And now I have it’s exciting and rewarding and also scary. </span></div>
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<span style="font-family: Gill Sans;">1. People. I’ve started putting my work out there and commenting on other people’s blogs and getting support and encouragement and feedback. Which I always knew I needed, I just had no idea how much. </span></div>
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<span style="font-family: Gill Sans;">2. Flash Fiction. Linking on from the above point, I've recently got some very positive feedback from my flash fiction. Having other people express that they like my writing has been a real confidence boost.</span><br />
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<span style="font-family: Gill Sans;">3. Time / Practise. I’ve been doing this for a while now. When I started writing, I didn’t know I wanted to write sci-fi YA. I thought I wanted to write fantasy for kids. Only through trial and error and reading new books did I find out where I wanted to be and start practising the right stuff. Which leads me to…</span></div>
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<span style="font-family: Gill Sans;">4. Reading the right stuff. For ages, this project stalled because I couldn’t get Pearl ’s voice right. She’s meant to be feral and uneducated. I just didn’t know how to make it work. That was until I read the Chaos Walking Trilogy by Patrick Ness and saw how someone else had done it and done it well. No, I haven’t copied Todd’s voice and I don’t use phonetic spelling, but seeing where someone else had got it right helped me work out how to give Pearl a strong and recognisable voice. I can hear her in my head when I’m writing, now. Until I got her voice right, I couldn’t do anything. So thanks Mr Ness.</span></div>
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<span style="font-family: Gill Sans;">5. This blog. In creating my blog, whether I realised it at the time or not, I shifted my perception of myself from someone who’s trying to write a book to someone who’s telling people they’re trying to write a book. I’m not doing this in secret anymore! I’m using my real name and my real face alongside my real words. Anyone who knows me could find this blog. And that makes me vulnerable because I might fail in this endeavour and I wouldn’t be able to hide it from anyone. But I’m doing it anyway because this matters to me and I don’t care who knows it.</span></div>
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<span style="font-family: Gill Sans;">6. Goals. I know goals are important but I always set my too high. 2,000 is what I can write on a good day when I'm feeling well and I'm not stressed out. 1,000, however, I can write on any day. Halving my goal has upped my productivity. It's also meant that I've been able to sit down and say "Well, this novel will be done by the 13th August". Not knowing when I would be contributing to the novel made it impossible to set that kind of goal before. But now I'm confident in my ability to get 1,000 words out a day and can therefore set a deadline. </span><br />
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<span style="font-family: Gill Sans;">So, there you have it. These factors (and probably a load more I haven’t thought about yet) mean that over the last two months I’ve become more focused, more driven and more enthusiastic. I don’t just think about writing sometimes, I think about it constantly. I don’t just write about characters, I care about them ( Pearl actually made me cry the other day). I go to bed thinking about my book. I read (aka “research”) on the bus to work and on my lunch break. I follow author blogs and writing blogs. I <i>tweet.</i></span></div>
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<span style="font-family: Gill Sans;">And all that’s impacted upon my writing. I’m in a new and exciting place. And it’s a little bit scary. </span></div>
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What I'm worrying about is all the extra stuff that comes with being an author. Reading other author's blogs has made me aware of how much touring and public speaking and conferencing they do. The idea of public speaking fills me with a dread bordering on phobia. <br />
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But by the looks of things interacting with people is pretty crucial when you're an author. Even if you're not public speaking, there's phone calls with agents and meetings with editors and signing with fans (imagine that, eh?). It's all incredibly daunting.<br />
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I know I'm getting ahead of myself, but the idea of actively choosing to put myself in the spotlight is so alien to me. I feel sick just thinking about it! Still, I know there's something I can do. Practise.<br />
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In the same way I have to practise writing to get better, surely I can practise these other skills, too? It's not unnattainable, it's just the process of getting there will be difficult...Anonymoushttp://www.blogger.com/profile/11770474548845786944noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2396070880757182219.post-65210625761672077772012-07-08T12:29:00.003-07:002012-07-08T12:29:42.784-07:00CelebrationWow. So the votes are in. I got a total of 6 likes for my flash fiction piece <i>and </i>a very nice person had gone out of their way to comment on it, too! I am thrilled. It means so much to me to know that other people enjoy my writing.<br />
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That said, the big news is... I got an "honourable mention"!<br />
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Go here: <a href="http://writerunboxed.com/" style="background-color: white;">http://writerunboxed.com/</a> to see my name mentioned on a well respected writer's blog!<br />
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WOW!Anonymoushttp://www.blogger.com/profile/11770474548845786944noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2396070880757182219.post-66403498379146502942012-07-02T10:03:00.000-07:002012-07-02T10:05:00.425-07:00Flash Fiction!I just wrote my first piece of flash fiction for a competition on <a href="http://writerunboxed.com/2012/07/01/7-sizzling-sundays-of-summer-flash-fiction-contest/?utm_source=feedburner&utm_medium=feed&utm_campaign=Feed%3A+WriterUnboxed+%28Writer+Unboxed%29">writer unbox</a> and thought I should post it here too for all to see!<br />
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Last delivery of the day. Thank God.</div>
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I peer at the glass vessel on the seat
beside me. The mask inside is all golden curls and thick eyelashes
and full lips. Hardly remarkable. Barely even beautiful.
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<i>What’s the point? If </i>I<i> had
the money, I’d transform into a superstar, not a housewife! </i>
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Rain splats against the windscreen. I
enter the client’s name and address into the Sat-Nav – Kim Low,
445 Grooble Street – then press “Go”. The car lurches forward
and weaves into the steady flow of traffic.
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The rain drenched city goes by.
Billboard after billboard. NuFace4U! Girls With Curls! Star Features!
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The further I go, the taller the
buildings get, until the sky is just a slither above me. Then the car
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Kim Low must have saved up for years
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<i>And it’s not even nice.</i></div>
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The car door pops open. I slide out,
heave the heavy glass jar into my aching arms and struggle up the
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Irritated, I slam my palm onto the
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“Package for Kim Low,” I say.</div>
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“Fancy Faces?” comes the wavering
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“Yup.”</div>
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There’s a spluttering sound. Sobbing.
Choking. And between the noise I can make out one word, whispered
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“Thank you…”</div>Anonymoushttp://www.blogger.com/profile/11770474548845786944noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2396070880757182219.post-64748001538884504692012-06-19T09:49:00.003-07:002012-06-19T10:21:12.745-07:00Taking Stock of It All<span style="background-color: white;">My manager was asking about my book earlier today (I think I've already mentioned how great she is). So I told her about it being a sci-fi book for teenagers. Then she remembered about a teacher she'd worked with in the past who writes YA who had just been published.</span><br />
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<span style="background-color: white;">So we googled him (<a href="http://www.jamesdawsonbooks.com/">http://www.jamesdawsonbooks.com/</a>) and read the blurb of his book (which is about witches) and I said, "The first book I wrote was about witches but it was really awful." </span><br />
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<span style="background-color: white;">And then I stopped. Because I realised what I'd said.</span><br />
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<b style="background-color: white;">"The first book I wrote..."</b><br />
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<span style="background-color: white;">I've never said that out loud. And in doing so, I realised something. I've only ever thought of that book in terms of it being "really awful". In fact, I've been so caught up in the awfulness of it, I've completely disregarded it.</span><br />
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<span style="background-color: white;">But what that awful first book is -- far more than being "awful" -- is a massive accomplishment.</span><br />
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<span style="background-color: white;">It was the point where I went from saying "I'd love to write a book one day," to saying "I've written a book". </span><br />
<span style="background-color: white;">It was the point where I learned that I had both the drive and the perseverance to start a project and see it through to the end. </span><br />
<span style="background-color: white;">It was the point where I learned what "awful" meant and what I needed to do to avoid "awful" in the future!</span><br />
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<span style="background-color: white;">And it wasn't until I was speaking to someone who hadn't written and book and had no desire to write one that I was able to see what I had accomplished.
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<span style="background-color: white;">I don't want to talk for everyone, but a lot of us seem hard-wired to focus on our short-comings rather than our achievements. I wonder if it's something to do with comparisons. When we surround ourselves with people who are at the top of their game, it's easy to see how far we have to go. "The more you know the more you know you don't know" as they say. I wonder, too, if it's because writing a novel is such a long, massive task. So much work goes into it that the end isn't in sight for a long, long time. And for me, I know that once I get to the end, there's a whole new load of things to learn because I'll have the query letter to write and the agents to research. And before even that I have to get over my fear of betas!</span><br />
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<span style="background-color: white;">Maybe we could all benefit from taking a step back and taking stock of what we've accomplished. Even if it's just a chapter or a page or even just a plot, it's one step closer to our ultimate goal. If I hadn't had that awful first book, I would never be where I am now.</span><br />
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<span style="background-color: white;">So let's congratulate ourselves today on what we've achieved, rather than focusing on how far we still have to go.</span><br />
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<span style="background-color: white;">-CB Soulsby</span><br />
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<span style="background-color: white;">PS - Since you're wondering, I managed to write 15,000 rage-fuelled words over the weekend!</span>Anonymoushttp://www.blogger.com/profile/11770474548845786944noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2396070880757182219.post-27003614891830863402012-06-15T08:47:00.001-07:002012-06-21T09:57:25.948-07:00Using Anger<br />
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I’m not an angry person. I do get
angry but then I almost immediately get sad. For me, anger involves
blame and animosity but (thanks to my Psychology degree) I spend most
of my life striving to understand and empathise with people. Add to
this my fear of causing anyone to feel anything even remotely
unpleasant (no matter how much they deserve it) and instead of
getting mad, I end up sad. And sadness, it turns out, is not a great
motivator.</div>
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Thanks to some coaching from my
amazing manager at work, I’m learning to become more assertive.
Backing down has been my defence strategy my whole life, and I
use it both as a way to avoid the unpleasantness of conflict and to
help the other person save face. It’s what she calls a “You’re
OK, I’m not OK” pattern of behaviour. In other words, the way I
behave in many of my interactions is to make sure the other person is
OK before myself, to the detriment of myself, even.
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So this time, round about the point I usually admit
defeat and dissolve into tears, I've vowed not to get sad but to stay angry for as long as I need to. Anger is a
valid emotion and one that I now realise is damaging for me to
suppress. And in allowing myself to be angry, an interesting thing
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Anger, it turns out, is a great
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Do you use your emotions to fuel your
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I have two main projects going on at the moment. I refer to them after their main characters: Pearl, and Ivy. I also have Generation Lawless, which is something I fall back on when I'm stuck with either of the other two. And as of today, I have Syrup.<br />
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Which leads me to the title of the post. Syrup came up as something to do because I didn't know what to do. Why? Well, I have a rough draft of Ivy I wrote by hand that needs to be put on my laptop before I move on, and I'm on the second draft of Pearl so I need my laptop with me to work from that. But I did not have my laptop at the time so neither of those were options.<br />
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So I did what I do when I don't know what to do. I came up with a new idea.<br />
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This doesn't always happen due to being sans laptop. Sometimes it's cos I've gotten stuck with a scene, or I've hit a plot hole and I'm berating myself for my stupid, or maybe I've become disillusioned with a character or a way of writing cos I've been staring at the same chapter for weeks on end. This happens with Pearl, for example, because she speaks in a lot of slang, and I have to make a really conscious effort to keep my writing authentic to her voice.<br />
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Sometimes, I just need to do something a little less labour intensive.<br />
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So this is how I do it.<br />
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I open (or draw, if I'm not near a computer) a "plot grid" template. It's basically just a table with four columns: Chapter, Synopsis, Sub-plot / Things to remember, Word Count, that's split into twenty rows and divided into five parts: Introduction, Act 1, Act 2, Act 3, Denouement. I split it into parts so that I can have a slightly different focus for each part and make sure the plot progresses and shifts rather than just plodding in a linear fashion.<br />
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So I get my grid and I think of ways to fill it in.<br />
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What's great about doing this is the complete freedom. I have no limitations, no preconceptions, no fear and no commitment. It doesn't matter if I only fill out the introduction box then give up because I'm really only filling my procrastination time.<br />
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And what's even more useful, is it helps me turn off my inner tweaker. Every time I read something or watch something, I get inspired. Which makes me make hasty decisions with my projects that I think are going to turn them into brilliant books but which in reality turns them into big piles of steaming confusion. Many a project of mine has ground to a halt this way.<br />
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Instead, what I do now, is make one of these plot-grids. Sometimes it's straight after a film, sometimes after the first page of a book. I just can't help reinventing what I consume (thought this mainly involves taking something that isn't set in space and sticking it in space...like turning dragons into robot octopuses or Nazis into aliens). It's fun but it's also important. Because instead of reading something and saying "Oh God my book is awful, why can't it be more like the master piece I'm reading?" I get to go "This is what I <i>would </i>do if I had the chance, but I don't have time to devote to this idea, so I'll just write it down and come back to it later." It takes the emotion out.<br />
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Then every once in a while, I hit on something I really like. Pearl was one of those. She was just an exercise in plotting and was where my plot grid came from in the first place. I wrote a first draft for her, put it away then came back six months later and realised I had something I could work with.<br />
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Today, I've struck something else that I'm willing to explore. I'm reading Divergent by Veronica Roth and it depicts a load of characters who I think are really far from the types I write. They're violent and selfish and arrogant and they take stupid risks with their lives. I'm such a cautious person that so many of my characters get bits of my own reticence seeping into them. So I started thinking of my own world where such selfish, dare-devil characters could live. Add to this the fact we have an ant infestation in my house at the moment, and a recent documentary that's been lingering in my mind about the Holocaust, and there I am, with a filled out plot grid that's the skeleton of a complete novel. Plus, I have a handful of characters to populate it.<br />
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Will I ever write it? Who knows. I've tried a preliminary first chapter which I like today, but may hate tomorrow.<br />
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The point is today hasn't been a wasted writing day. I've honed my skills. I've thought creatively. I've worked on character development, dialogue, action, rising tension. I've practised grammar and spelling.<br />
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And it's all helped my main projects as well, because I haven't been tempted to mess with them. Granted, it would be easier if I could focus, but in the meantime I think it's a pretty effective use of those dead spaces.<br />
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<br />Anonymoushttp://www.blogger.com/profile/11770474548845786944noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2396070880757182219.post-65542736980477100492012-06-01T11:09:00.002-07:002012-06-21T09:58:52.039-07:00Pick Me Ups<br />
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I can’t count the amount of times
tea, coffee, chocolate, wine, Pro-Plus or other stimulants are
advocated as a way of getting through the writing process. Great if
it works. But what if you can’t rely on these?</div>
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Due to my ME/CFS, it’s incredibly
important that I don’t consume stimulants. This kind of “fake”
energy can have disastrous long-term implications (think of it like
drinking alcohol; you can stay up for hours on end because it makes
you believe you have more energy than you do, but eventually you will
run out of steam and you will get a hangover. That’s me. But with
tea).</div>
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That said, I do use pick me ups. Just
really boring, sensible ones.
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Water – Staying hydrated is
ridiculously important when you have ME/ CFS (well, it is for
everyone, but even more so for us!). I always have a big bottle of
water to hand because if it’s there, I’ll drink it. Yes, I do
spend all day peeing, but atleast inbetween the toilet breaks, I can
concentrate enough to produce some good writing!</div>
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Co-Enzyme Q-10 – there’s no
current guidelines on the amount of this that can be consumed in a
day. You can have 3 tablets at a time, and I’ve read about people
doing this up to three times a day though I personally feel that’s
pretty excessive. I only use it rarely, as and when and it’s
pretty good at making me more alert!</div>
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Omega 3 –This was a real turning
point for me in my recovery process and helps keep the dreaded
“brain fog” at bay. At the moment, I take 5 IQ tablets a day.
People with ME/CFS generally respond well to taking it in vast
quantities (though try to get the stuff that has less DHA as this
can build up in the body and cause other problems). VegEPA is DHA
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Fresh fruit / veg – these guys
have loads of nutrients and are very low on the Glycamic Index,
which means they give me energy without a nasty sugar crash.
Snacking regularly instead of having big meals is considered very
helpful for people with ME/CFS as it keeps energy levels stable and
means the body doesn’t have to waste energy digesting. I recommend
anything you can eat whilst still typing (so definitely no oranges
or kiwi fruit) and I usually eat something every hour.</div>
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Pacing – can’t beat the power
of a pace. For those who aren’t familiar with pacing, it usually
requires closing your eyes, lying down (or atleast getting cosy),
and trying to shut down your brain for at least twenty minutes. I
don’t pace nearly as much as I should (doctors recommend 4 lots of
20 minute sessions a day regardless of how good you’re feeling
that day), but it’s always incredibly refreshing. I have to listen
to music when I pace because if I leave my brain unoccupied for any
period of time, it tends to lead me to a bad, dark, despairing
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So those are my top tips for staying
alert. They’re not full-proof but I definitely produce more and
better quality work when I use them.</div>
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Good luck, let me know what your
pick-me-ups are in the comments!</div>Anonymoushttp://www.blogger.com/profile/11770474548845786944noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2396070880757182219.post-1902363652412702382012-05-20T06:21:00.003-07:002012-06-21T09:58:08.582-07:00This week in writingWow. So something truly magical happened to me this week. I realised that it had been about a year since I'd stated writing my first novel (which is still languishing in first draft format somewhere on my hard drive) and to celebrate this milestone, I decided to look back over all those other terrible first drafts I'd produced, just to prove to myself how much I'd evolved as a writer.<br />
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Among all the false starts, one piece (sci-fi) had made it all the way up to the <b>last chapter</b> before I'd gotten confused by my own plot-twists and run out of faith in myself.<br />
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So I read through it.<br />
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And it was <i>good</i>...<br />
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With my fresh objective eyes, I could see it for what it was: a pretty decent story with interesting characters and believable dialogue and plot twists.<br />
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So I set about thinking of an ending. And then I started writing.<br />
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8,000 words later and months after I first started working on it, the first draft is complete.<br />
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And I'm still excited! I haven't finished it with this sense of dread about everything that I need to go back and change about it. I'm actually looking forward to make this story shine.<br />
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And all I needed was time, by leaving the first draft and working on other projects so that when I came back to it it didn't even look like something I'd written.<br />
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Generation Lawless will have to take a backseat, because this project is really going places. I just hope I can finish it before the doom sets in this time!Anonymoushttp://www.blogger.com/profile/11770474548845786944noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2396070880757182219.post-50349186630273731462012-05-14T07:46:00.002-07:002012-05-14T07:46:42.489-07:00Slight change of Direction<br />
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I’ve decide that this blog will be
devoted to the <b>process</b> of writing a novel with a focus on the
<b>emotional impact</b> of doing so. It will still contain the short
“episodes” of the novel as I write it, but I will also include
behind the scenes detail – what I’ve achieved this week, my
short-falls, how I’ve felt throughout, and how I’ve overcome (or
not!) the problems I’ve encountered.
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My aim is to provide an <b>honest</b>
account of my experience of the creative process in the hope that
others may benefit from it. There are many blogs out there with
articles on the trials and tribulations of novel writing (this one
from YA highway is particularly good) but for me, the emotional side
of writing is my biggest hurdle and most enduring problem.</div>
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Why? I believe this is because of my
health problems; I have depression and ME/CFS, and both like to put
their respect spanners in my way on a regular basis. A lot of what I
read on the internet about “Writers Block” follow the
Pull-Yourself-Together school of thought – keep going, plod on,
work through it, chin up. It’s great advice that I know through
experience that my brain doesn’t respond well to. Hammering away at
a problem (in any avenue of my life) can lead to me being overwhelmed
with self-doubt and can trigger depressive episodes. Stopping,
walking away, resting and re-evaluating are always better strategies
for me but that greatly effects my productivity.</div>
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So how do I overcome these hurdles?
That’s what this blog will be devoted to: <b>support </b>and<b>
advice</b> for getting a brain that lacks motivation into gear, that
lacks concentration to focus, that gives way to irritability and
anger to chill the hell out! Can I silence my self-doubt enough to
achieve my dream? I suppose only time can tell…</div>Anonymoushttp://www.blogger.com/profile/11770474548845786944noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2396070880757182219.post-3412747845655775712012-05-08T13:28:00.000-07:002012-05-09T12:11:49.033-07:00Plentiville - The placeImagine how the Earth might be if the population kept increasing, if our fuel consumption did too, if buildings got taller and spread across the countryside as sea-levels rose, destroying coastal dwellings and making their residents homeless. Now imagine if technology existed that meant we could terraform other suitable planets and<i> </i>fly out to them within a reasonable measure of time. Would we leave, or would we stay behind to clear up our mess?<br />
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Who would leave? Who would stay behind?<br />
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Who would decide?<br />
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This was the starting basis for my construction of Plentiville. In my imagination, the people who'd leave Earth would be the wealthiest; the ones most culpable for its destruction and those more able (and willing) to leave their mess behind.<br />
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The fundamentally religious would also see an opportunity in leaving Earth. How could they resist the appeal of setting up a world where only <i>their</i> religion and beliefs were practised?<br />
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Trickling down from this, different political groups may want to leave to start worlds where their opinions weren't challenged. Imagine the scope for abuse?!<br />
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In the future I've created for Generation Lawless, this is how the first colonies are created. Different groups splitting off from the mainstream to create worlds that fit in with their own ideological beliefs.<br />
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Once all these groups leave, the Earth that's left behind is a desolate, decaying, wasteland. There may be some who try to create a better world, but there would be many more who would seize this opportunity to take power. Imagine if there were no coherent police force? No courts to uphold the law? How long would there <i>be</i> a law left to uphold?<br />
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Plentiville is meant to have come into existence a significant time after terraforming rose in popularity, as an alternative to the other models that were in existence. Its aim was to be a world where children had childhoods, similar to the ones their grandparents may have experienced; with schools, roads, transportation, parks, cinemas, galleries, museums. It aimed to be self-sufficient, with an abundance of resources. Basically, Plentiville is meant to be an example of how <i>our</i> world could be.<br />
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The first wave of Settlers to Plentiville were those with skills: builders, farmers, carpenters, anyone who could construct the dream world its founders envisioned. The second wave of settlers, who set off from Earth five years later, was made up of families who wanted to raise their children in what could, potentially, be a utopian civilisation.<br />
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But of course, that utopia was not to be...Anonymoushttp://www.blogger.com/profile/11770474548845786944noreply@blogger.com